Hunter blue

[wackycouesaddict]

Ha i wrote this piece this moring around four, my mom found it. After i passed out on the couch she informed she liked and i should see wat other people think so i figured i would post it.

 

I sit here on this roof.

Of a house no bigger then most.

In a place of roof tops and lights.

A forest of noises and poeple.

Yet these last few nights .

This feeling has pulled me up.

To sit and wait for something - i have no clue.

Then in the hunter blue sky just before light

In the distance theres a bugle.

Two houses over at the crest - a silhouette.

First an elk, then a coues chasin does, - two mulies fighting.

I look down as a mountian lion jumps from the wall below.

The morning chill of a future fall,

Sends shivers down my spine.

I feel an odd moistness in my hands like moring dew.

Then i hear it a car door slams a horn honks.

im brought back to this jungle only to fall asleep.

to dream of hunts to come.

memories to be made and many hunter blue mornings to come.

 

 

I dont beleive it to be much just lines in a note book with mmany more lines. So let me know if you think these should stay in the book haha.

Hope its a good read.

 

Tyler

[NRS]

It is very good, just need to get somebody to proof read and correct the spelling and it should be ready to be published!

[Browning'sCustomMeat]

I like it! Keep it up!

 

-Jeremy-

[CouesWhitetail]

I like it! In fact I think you should let me add it to the hunting poetry section we have here.

 

http://www.coueswhitetail.com/hunt_stories/hunt_stories.htm

[bonecollector]

Good job!

[wackycouesaddict]

Yes it needs proof reading my editor (my sis) is at a sleep over haha.

But thank you guys

Tyler

[THOR]

great job....that time of year can't come soon enough!

[wackycouesaddict]

great job....that time of year can't come soon enough!

 

I know this is the worst knowing i have my elk tag and wanting it to be september. Then im waiting for deer tags to post. I hate summer for no other reason then it prolongs hunting, My teachers and friends do not understand.

 

And now that im fully awake i have gone back and done some editing looks a little better.

 

Amanda if you would like to you can add it i wouldnt mind.